The problem is that the transition to the hospital then the next set-up scene felt disjointed. We barely had enough time to really soak things in and all the sudden, here's another four women? Took me a minute to realize it was four other women.
This, along with what you mentioned about the Jungle Julia character text messaging that guy, were the two main things about Death Proof that threw me off. I completely agree with you on both counts. The text messaging thing was completely pointless. The transition to the second part of the movie (which somehow transitions from Texas to Tennessee with no warning) was very abrupt and confusing. They could have thrown in at least a "3 years later..." type of thing to help set it up.
I know, I know, I paid to see a Grindhouse movie and it's not supposed to have a fluent plot or any kind of meaningful dialogue. I get it. But still, some things could have been clarified better.
All in all, it was still a fun time. I would go see it again. They do need an intermission though.
The whole beginning of Death Proof had no point as far as I'm concerned. Compare it with the conversation with the second set of girls. They talk about how Zoe never gets hurt, how they're all movie people, how they want this car, etc. All of that plays out when they run into Kurt Russell.
What do the first set of girls talk about? The DJ girl always has to score the weed, she's a popular DJ, she wants to see this film director, these guys are scheming how to hook up with them, they play some cool music, QT gets his usual cameo appearance. The only part of the dialogue that I can remember that has anything to do with the next act is the lap dance part because that brings in Kurt Russell. Otherwise, NOTHING they talk about has any point IMO besides showing off the girls as eye candy.
If, as one person has argued, that it's suppose to contrast their everyday existence with their violent and unexpected death than it's a complete failure.